While it rains,
I feel it is better to be dry.
When it is dry,
I want it to rain!
Stormy or calm
Violence or silence
Every rain is painful,
Every rain supports birth!
I love the pain,
As I need a life!
I want a birth
From the seed!
Cloudy up in the sky,
Sweating before rain,
I beg for a shower,
I wait for raindrops!
Born out of a struggle,
Laughing at the pain,
No matter what happens,
It should rain heavily!
kewl!!! me likie :)
ReplyDeletefirst feedback... Thanks :)
DeleteScintillating lines, Just like you rain holds a dear place in my heart.
ReplyDeleteYeah...Rain is always special for me :)
DeleteCan you believe it? I too wrote something similar...http://nishdil.blogspot.com/2012/01/my-garden.html
ReplyDeleteWhat say???
I saw it.But mine is a different theme.Hope you got it :)
Deleteyes, I got that! :-)
Deletevery nicely written gives a diffrent meaning to rain a deeper one:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Alka Narula
DeleteNice poem! You capture the essence of rain :)
DeleteThanks Sujana :)
DeleteSo so gorgeously rain-felt poem! :) Love it!
ReplyDeleteI loved your blog title. Hence came here right away!! :)
Thanks dear.I am honored :)
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