Monday, February 7, 2011

Simply to Make You Smile


Tell me what to write about you,
Tell me how to write on you...
You call me your sweet friend
I call you my best friend!

We don't have a long history
Of friendship...
May be a few months
Or countable days...

Fun, fight, joy,tears...
Gossips,pranks,nick names...
Moments we shared,
Missing everything...

When everyone left me,
You stood with me...
We acted like enemies,
To see puzzled look of others!

I need you to irritate me,
I want you to make me angry,
To see the smile on your face
Just the way you smile now...
Posted by at 11:58 AM

24 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2011 at 12:50 PM

    congrats.
    good wrk... keep posting....

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  2. MeenzFebruary 7, 2011 at 1:06 PM

    thats lovely... loved it!!! good job gal..u back on track ^_^

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  3. UnknownFebruary 7, 2011 at 4:58 PM

    even tides cudnt wash that off:)nice

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  4. roopzFebruary 7, 2011 at 5:35 PM

    Thanks navin, meenakshi and kishore... Hope my poem has brought a smile on my friend's face. Anyway your comments have made me smile :)

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  5. DasFebruary 8, 2011 at 3:50 PM

    I Hear You Knocking...

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  6. roopzFebruary 9, 2011 at 9:45 AM

    Knocking?

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  7. HariPrasanna LathaJayanFebruary 11, 2011 at 2:21 PM

    Dont feel more......it will lead you to enter into the world of maddness...........

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  8. LuxuriesFebruary 13, 2011 at 9:58 PM

    NIce Blog

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  9. SunshineMay 5, 2011 at 12:03 PM

    Superb Roopa!!!! grt work:) keep going....

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  10. sebaAugust 6, 2011 at 11:46 AM

    nice words

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  11. roopzAugust 10, 2011 at 10:22 AM

    Thanks all of you..

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  12. ArtiOctober 11, 2011 at 3:52 PM

    Friendship is not counted in years but in moments shared... the feelings have been very nicely penned down Roopa, keep them flowing :)

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  13. roopzOctober 11, 2011 at 4:11 PM

    Exactly!
    Thanks dear...

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  14. SeemaOctober 11, 2011 at 4:47 PM

    Good work

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  15. roopzOctober 11, 2011 at 4:51 PM

    Thank You Seema

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  16. Vinay Leo R.October 12, 2011 at 12:11 AM

    Sweet and simple :) A tale of friendship or even thoughts for the sea!

    Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason

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  17. CherukattuOctober 16, 2011 at 6:17 PM

    wrote from the heart rt?

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  18. roopzOctober 17, 2011 at 10:37 AM

    yeah...true from my heart

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  19. AnonymousNovember 19, 2011 at 12:55 PM

    You really deserve that smile..!

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  20. roopzNovember 20, 2011 at 3:51 PM

    Thank you Rajeevan :)

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  21. mohamedali jinnahMay 9, 2012 at 5:59 PM

    "Even a smile is a charity"

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  22. roopzMay 10, 2012 at 9:33 AM

    True Nidurali...Thanks for the feedback :)

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  23. sudha...a touch of madnessJuly 25, 2012 at 11:56 PM

    Hey! You have been nominated for an award which you can collect here: http://thelidislifted.blogspot.in/2012/07/my-1st-award.html
    Keep up the good work :)

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    1. roopzAugust 5, 2012 at 9:09 PM

      Thanks a lot for this award...It is really precious :)

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