Thursday, April 12, 2012

End of a Fairytale

Tears dried up
Motionless I stay!
Broken words
Lifeless thoughts!

Why did I imagine
What did I get!
All questions to me
Clueless I am!

Tunes did not match
Rhythm is not right!
Once a perfect song
Now a nuisance!

Unexpected turns
Unique twists!
A colorful fairytale
Ends with no smile!

16 comments:

  1. Some of the best compositions in the world are the ones with the tunes that didn't match and the rhythm not correct. And such turns are the transition scores for any colorful fairy tale.

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    1. Thats true Leo...Some tunes succeed while others fail :)

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  2. its not fairytale if its ended... u were settling for the rest when u deserve the best.. sometime we don't really know what is best for us and think we lost something.. but they are just sparkling stone.. not a diamond forever.. u will get one!

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    1. Yeah...waiting for the diamond ;)
      Thanks Meenz :)

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    1. Sometimes only tragedy happens ;)

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  4. And such is everything in life; starts off shiny fades off in the end...

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  5. the sweetest of tones are always tell of the saddest of thoughts. obviously no story ends anywhere. it always effect the very next story to come. anyway i enjoyed reading this poem. these days i more interested in heart breaking verses.

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    1. Hope my poem is interesting for you in that case :)

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  6. rightly said... in real life most of the time we never get what we want... nice poem :)

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