Thursday, June 14, 2012

Breaking A Block



Me A Village Girl
From A Small World!
Like Tiny Raindrops
With Little Dreams…!

I am not a writer
I just worship words!
I joined letters
You called it poem!

I couldn’t bear the strain
For you it’s poet’s block!
Like a cloudy sky
Waiting to shed its tears!

Alas! I scribbled
A few crazy lines!
Today I smiled
And hope you too!

12 comments:

  1. hey new to ur blog.... nice one yaar... yea i smiled :) felt an innocence in the words.... keep going :)

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    1. Thanks Anjali for your comment as well as visit :)

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  2. So sweet reading this....you are on the track...keep going..

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    1. Thanks Sreeja...
      Hope I am on the track :)

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  3. nice one roopz ,you are really a good writer with some special talent so take it seriously don't just limit yourself as a content writer you have the potential to go very far .please always make others smile through your gifted talent .

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  4. A nice poem, but why the constant village girl fixation? repetition makes it (it does) sound like cliche.

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    1. Thanks for the suggestion and comment...

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