Me A Village Girl
From A Small World!
Like Tiny Raindrops
With Little Dreams…!
I am not a writer
I just worship words!
I joined letters
You called it poem!
I couldn’t bear the strain
For you it’s poet’s block!
Like a cloudy sky
Waiting to shed its tears!
Alas! I scribbled
A few crazy lines!
Today I smiled
And hope you too!
i smiled :)
ReplyDeleteI know you will :)
Deletehey new to ur blog.... nice one yaar... yea i smiled :) felt an innocence in the words.... keep going :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anjali for your comment as well as visit :)
DeleteSo sweet reading this....you are on the track...keep going..
ReplyDeleteThanks Sreeja...
DeleteHope I am on the track :)
ys roopz i did :)
ReplyDeleteSweet smile :)
Deletenice one roopz ,you are really a good writer with some special talent so take it seriously don't just limit yourself as a content writer you have the potential to go very far .please always make others smile through your gifted talent .
ReplyDeleteThanks Anonymous :)
DeleteA nice poem, but why the constant village girl fixation? repetition makes it (it does) sound like cliche.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the suggestion and comment...
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