Friday, September 30, 2011

Pale Body And Wandering Mind


I dumped my emotions,
Deep inside.
I smiled at everyone,
From my heart...

My dreams wandered
Without limits.
My thoughts hovered
Without any concern...

My body begged:
Stop thinking too much.
My heart shouted:
Thoughts keep me going.

Veins dried up,
Making me pale...
My eyes say don't sleep
My stomach says don't eat.

Half-alive I lay,
Without hunger and sleep.
Mind still roams,
In a world I always dreamed
Posted by at 12:29 PM

23 comments:

  1. MeenzSeptember 30, 2011 at 1:09 PM

    one of ur best poem i have read ^_^

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  2. roopzSeptember 30, 2011 at 1:17 PM

    Thanks meenz...
    May be because its true from my heart and not written for namesake, it came up well...

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  3. ജാബിര്‍ മലബാരിOctober 3, 2011 at 12:07 PM

    I smiled at everyone,
    From my heart...


    Nice :)

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  4. roopzOctober 3, 2011 at 1:57 PM

    Thank you...
    Yeah! I really smiled at everyone from my heart :)

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  5. SwethaOctober 8, 2011 at 11:24 AM

    Nice blog...
    very nice poem, simply great..

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  6. roopzOctober 8, 2011 at 2:34 PM

    Thanks Swetha...
    Thank you very much...

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  7. DasOctober 9, 2011 at 11:39 AM

    Veins dried up?!! It's your blood that flows through my veins and encircling my heart. It’s your blood!!! It’s your blood!!!

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  8. roopzOctober 9, 2011 at 5:58 PM

    I didn't get the exact idea what you meant...It will be nice if you could explain it...

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  9. S.V.Sai babaOctober 10, 2011 at 3:53 PM

    A good poem indeed and your blog's layout is also very nice.

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  10. roopzOctober 10, 2011 at 4:26 PM

    Thank you Mr. Sai

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  11. UnknownOctober 11, 2011 at 10:31 AM

    Woww...but why so sad?

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  12. roopzOctober 11, 2011 at 10:54 AM

    A few dreams yet to be fulfilled...
    Mind is wandering on that making my body pale...Simple!!!

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  13. Rajkumar ROctober 11, 2011 at 11:04 AM

    I love this template!!!

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  14. roopzOctober 11, 2011 at 11:20 AM

    Thanks Rajkumar....

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  15. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺October 11, 2011 at 3:11 PM

    Good poem :)

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  16. roopzOctober 11, 2011 at 4:12 PM

    Thanks Valli :)

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  17. AnonymousOctober 11, 2011 at 5:57 PM

    nice poem
    A little sad
    I m not into poetry that much so couldn't fully understand what you wanted to convey

    -Black and White Sketches

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  18. Vinay Leo R.October 11, 2011 at 7:36 PM

    Interesting... But then again, mind and heart roaming in dreams even when the gut feeling is not to do so, that's quite normal isn't it? :) Liked it!

    Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason

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  19. roopzOctober 12, 2011 at 10:39 AM

    Yes Leo...Its always like that...
    Thanks bwsketches...

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  20. HarshaOctober 12, 2011 at 10:19 PM

    Beautiful lines! So practical. :)

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  21. roopzOctober 13, 2011 at 10:16 AM

    Thanks Harsha....

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  22. ఎందుకో ? ఏమో !November 6, 2011 at 7:46 AM

    Very Good

    Nice

    ?!

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  23. roopzNovember 9, 2011 at 11:24 AM

    Thank you :)

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