Dead thoughts
Unfocused ideas
Cloudy black sky
Sweaty dull day!
From a distance,
Then came a roar!
Ended the suspense
With heavy shower.
Dry soil and leaves
Thirsty creatures
Thanked with joy
For a lovely rain!
A valley and hill
Just me and myself
A tiny water drop
Kissed my forehead!
Oh! Rain vanished
Just like memoirs.
Was it a dream?
Wet earth says not!
A beautiful poem on rain, when it is unexpected, it's even more beautiful. Last line where you have written about Earth vouching for the event is lovely.
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DeleteThe village girl has voiced a rain so well.. Good one!
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DeleteBeautiful imagery!
ReplyDeleteThank you magiceye :)
DeleteAbsolutely soothing poem,mesmerising,to say the least...great work...
ReplyDeleteThanks Rajesh Thakkar :)
DeleteNice one with the fantastic feel....
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Deletebeautiful! the scantiness in your words have made it more open and imaginable, which adds to the beauty of the fact when a sudden rain comes along, takes our pain away for a few moments, and then vanishes quickly as it had appeared.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for your wonderful remark Pratik Mohapatra
DeleteBeen so late to respond. nicely done. i wonder does the rain is a metaphor or something.
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