Wednesday, November 2, 2011

An Ode To A Stranger



We lived as sweet friends,
We talked as close friends,
We moved as best friends,
We left as strangers!!!

I regret that moment,
I walked away from you!
I want to go back again,
I wish you knew me!

Waiting for a glimpse,
Waiting for a word,
Waiting for a pat,
Waiting for a smile...
Posted by at 10:26 AM

40 comments:

  1. LeoPawNovember 2, 2011 at 11:07 AM

    Good one Roops. Short, simple and yet very painful.

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  2. roopzNovember 2, 2011 at 11:22 AM

    Yeah...It is indeed painful...
    Thanks Leo...

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  3. Geeta SinghNovember 2, 2011 at 11:53 AM

    hmm..must read poem:)

    Hair Hair Hair

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  4. KadalassNovember 2, 2011 at 11:57 AM

    Short.......
    Painful............
    Meaningful..............

    All the best!

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  5. roopzNovember 2, 2011 at 11:57 AM

    Thanks Geetha...
    In between, your blog is also awesome...
    Keep writing!

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  6. roopzNovember 2, 2011 at 12:02 PM

    Thanks Muhammedkunji...
    Encouragement and prayers of my readers help me to improve...

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  7. ജാബിര്‍ മലബാരിNovember 2, 2011 at 12:36 PM

    Waiting for a smile...

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  8. roopzNovember 2, 2011 at 12:47 PM

    I'm also waiting :)

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  9. Ashish JoshiNovember 2, 2011 at 1:43 PM

    may the waiting be over soon ...

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  10. roopzNovember 2, 2011 at 1:44 PM

    Hope so...

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  11. UnknownNovember 2, 2011 at 1:56 PM

    It is always difficult to describe simple things. Try describing friendship or Love; you can write page and epics, but still we are asking same questions. Wht is love and friendship.

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  12. AnonymousNovember 2, 2011 at 1:58 PM

    hope you meet your friend soon...

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  13. roopzNovember 2, 2011 at 2:01 PM

    Exactly Prajith Aman...Those two are tough to describe!
    Thanks TheBluntBlogger...

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  14. Praveen KumarNovember 2, 2011 at 2:19 PM

    Wow, so sweet & very painful, thanks for good sharing.

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  15. roopzNovember 2, 2011 at 2:24 PM

    Thanks Praveen...

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  16. AnonymousNovember 2, 2011 at 2:26 PM

    "We left as strangers" almost every close friendship has that unanswered question, why? Something similar happened to me some time back, though I know lost past cannot relive again, still I wait, like you ... *hugs* :)

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  17. roopzNovember 2, 2011 at 2:42 PM

    That was really a touching remark...Once your best friend leave you, it is like the whole world is empty.Thanks a lot dear for your hug too...I'll also wait for your friend to be back to bring a smile on your face...

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  18. NishaNovember 4, 2011 at 1:07 PM

    Shortest of your poems that I've read, but the impact has been the greatest. Shows how a few apt words can tell a story better!!!
    Like this a lot...

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  19. roopzNovember 4, 2011 at 1:22 PM

    I love writing short and simple...Thank you Nishdathi

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  20. Gautam S BrahmaNovember 4, 2011 at 5:13 PM

    True emotions :) True lines

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  21. roopzNovember 5, 2011 at 12:36 PM

    Thanks Gautam...

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  22. SwethaNovember 5, 2011 at 7:35 PM

    Hai,

    Again a nice writing from u... thanks. well written.... true feelings....

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  23. roopzNovember 5, 2011 at 7:52 PM

    Again thanks to you :)

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  24. Sanctified SpacesNovember 5, 2011 at 10:50 PM

    Cute poem roopz..thank you for stopping by and for your wishes.

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  25. DasNovember 8, 2011 at 1:00 PM

    I'm Still Here...

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  26. roopzNovember 9, 2011 at 11:20 AM

    Its not you Das...
    Anyway thanks for posting a comment after a very long time...

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  27. Aman DeshmukhNovember 9, 2011 at 7:17 PM

    lovely poem...! :)
    Here's a shot film I saw on YouTube that is almost on the same lines as your beautiful poem..take a look : http://youtu.be/tSdELZxEnHY
    =)

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  28. roopzNovember 9, 2011 at 9:50 PM

    Thanks for the video n comment Aman :)

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  29. MeenzNovember 11, 2011 at 11:47 AM

    awesome line and u are IDIOT!!!

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  30. roopzNovember 11, 2011 at 11:52 AM

    Thank you...That was too little of what I'd expected from you :)

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  31. ProsenjeetNovember 11, 2011 at 7:51 PM

    Sweet,simple,lovely :)

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  32. roopzNovember 12, 2011 at 11:58 AM

    Thanks for your comment Prosenjeet :)

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  33. VimalJanuary 16, 2012 at 4:25 PM

    story of my life :) nice one Roopakutty.

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  34. roopzJanuary 16, 2012 at 5:44 PM

    Thanks Vimal :)

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  35. Vijay MenonJanuary 31, 2012 at 5:21 PM

    And may the wait end soon..
    Good one :)

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  36. roopzFebruary 3, 2012 at 1:52 PM

    Thanks for the wish Vijay :)

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  37. AnonymousMarch 4, 2012 at 3:34 PM

    sneham manasinte vingallaanu..sauhrudam athu maaykunna marunum...!!!

    charlessebz...

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  38. MPJuly 1, 2012 at 2:14 PM

    This is truly genious! Continue to pen lovely words.

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